All Comments on 'Naked Wedding, Mom's Relief'

There's nothing new here in terms of core action / main entreė, but it's the imaginative preparation and presentation of appetizers that make old seem original. Mom and son had nice rapport which kick starts each individual pushing of carnal envelope. Full marks. *****

This is a wonderful stand-alone story, but you could easily continue it to reveal what else cums up before they go home. Lots of possibilities.

I imagine that Riding a Cock is like Riding a Bicycle ... once you learn how, you never forget. So, if Jane is a prim & proper hausfrau now then when/where did she acquire her skills? It sounds like Sonny Boy (I don't recall seeing his name anywhere) is pondering the same thing.

This spa vacation looks like a great opportunity for the two to let it all hang out and do a little more exploring. You didn't say whether or not Sonny Boy was a virgin, but I think it might be great for Aunt Helen to do a little bonding with her nephew. I mean, is it cheating as long as you keep it in the family?

more chapters please

It was a quick an sexy story but it left me wanting for more. Potential is there so please do continue with the sexcapades!

5*

I could only give this story a three, because the author stopped so far short of a truly satisfactory ending - and is in the habit of never giving his readers a second chapter, no matter how much they ask for one.

Please add some more chapters, this time the Mother and Sister get together with the son coming added too.

I know you haven't done a 2nd chapter for any of your stories. You need to for this one. Sisters, mother & son, aunt & nephew, group sex. All can be chapters.

Great story. Love the humour a Nd the topic. I really hope you do a chapter 3

I really liked this just as it was.

I like the prim mommy gives in stories so this was great for that, but enjoy plausible twists and turns which this lacked. A sequel could be fun.

I hope there is a part 2.

I love how all the sex between mom and son is done for perfectly sensible reasons. What a good mom! Would have enjoyed seeing cum rolling down her thighs as she stood up for her sister in the nude wedding.

Earth-scorchingly hot was this tale of two lovers. More! More!

What a hot story there needs to be more to this than 1 chapter, you have all the right ingredients to continue this story. The second chapter is going to be hot please continue this story..

I hope that there's more planned after this because seriously, I NEED more!

It works just fine as a stand-alone but a Chapter 2 would also be welcome.

I love the image at the end, as the wedding guests are all standing naked, "I noticed cum leaking down mom's thighs, from deep inside her pussy. It was my cum from before, buried deep inside her cunt." That has to be the best sight a son will ever see--his own creamy semen trickling down his own mother's thighs from the warm wet mommy-cunt he's just fucked the hell out of.

What else can I say? ;)

A well written and very different story. Arousing and special between a Mother and Son who had to deal with sexual feelings in a very different environment. Hot and we need to read more. Obviously, they both have to get through the rest of the day and night. The rest of the trip and what happens back home ?? Hopefully, the son lives at home while going to college. Maybe, that prim and proper Mom who is a strict professional; will tell the rest of the story about her sexual side from college to now. What she misses and how he can help. I think they can work out many details. Thank you .............

Ohhhhhh my gosh.... your/this sorry is so incredibly HOT....

Please write some more......

like the other comments, we need the rest of the story. further chapters would be very nice esp. if they are as well composed as the first chapter.

More please. No sharing with other party guest. Just wonderful things between this sexy couple. Such a hot beginning.

This is a great story and another chapter would have been great.

I fantastic story! Please continue it :)

kept me reading right to the end

Wonderful story; well written; entertaining; stimulating. Yes indeed more stories please.

5 stars. I loved the story, as far as it goes. However, I hope you add more, at least one or two chapters to cover what happens after the wedding and when they get back home.

Was hoping for another 10 pages. Hoping for more chapters soon

Nice one, HeyAll. Just a little bit rushed towards fulfilment. But there should be some mileage in a second part. After the wedding party...back home etc.

What stands out the most for me was your minimalist approach in describing the characters. You left it up to the reader's imagination to picture what these people looked like instead of drawing them in great detail. It worked.

Very hot. I gave it 5 stars.

Gave it a big old 5!!!!

What happens when you two get home?

That was great! Was hoping it would continue as least for the rest of the trip.

You have just GOT to continuethis tale. The possibilities are endless.

my favorite writer god damn keep it up shit just wow your writings give me the most powerful orgasms ive had in a while

That's a good mom right there,she did everything for her son, he really didn't do a lot for her.

Nice short story.

Gave it 5-star rating. But it seems as if the son is late teens or early 20s. I'm almost 71, but I get hard again not too long after sex. I don't think what mom did would take all the starch out of sonny! I think he would be packing wood almost constantly. At nudist resorts, you are given a towel to use as necessary. That includes masking a stiffy.

I had a hard on all the way. I never did, but I did do a very tight sister more than once. This story reminded me. Hard on, hard on,C2F1 hard on.....

a good stroke, story waiting to hear more of their adventure with aunt Helen. keep on trucking tenbears43

Please continue the tale.

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope there is more to come. Thanks for sharing it.

I loved it. Hopefully you keep it going

Excellent!

awesome. original, well written, would like to read a part 2, get the aunt and even the fiance involved?

Great! Sequel please? After the wedding, the woman who caught them could join

MORE please!!!!1

What a delight! An original storyline, with potential for future development. Well done.

Hope you can continue to resister hyperbole and keep a moral aspect to the tale.

But also kind of romantic, what with the mom so eager to help out her son (who's name we still don't know). It cold have used some more kissing to really seal the deal.

Next time: anal?

i enjoyed reading it 5 stars .i hope you make a sequel for it because i really loved it

DEFINITELY A 5 STAR STORY. NEEDS A SEQUEL BACK IN THE USA HOW THE TWO CONTINUE TO RAVISH EACH OTHER

Great Story - definitely 5 stars. But I think a sequel will be a case of a story that has "Jumped the Shark". I think that the image in my mind of his mom wiping his cum from her leg as she stands in front of the wedding guests can't be beaten.

That was a great story. There definitely needs at least one more chapter after they get back to their room. A man cannot go without eating pussy.

Awesome sexual story. I loved how the mother and son got into being nude together. Then casually having sex with each other. I hope you continue this story, after the wedding. maybe mom and sis get together with the groom and son for the after wedding party.

Please continue with a sequel as this is a very hot start to many more adventures in this mother son relationship. Very good work

there is no way you can end this story now... just no way...

Delightful. I would have liked to have seen the mother and the son giving in to having sex with each other among the wedding guests.

Please continue.

What a horny story. More please

What a beautiful narration! every day I see my mom's nakedness, but no erection. after reading this story my cock began to raise I want to fuck my mom who always ready to satisfy my desires.

The easiest 5 stars vote I gave in a long long time . Wow !! Great story .. More like that please .. Well one

i want to knlw more about nacked wedding if y suppose please mre about your stories

please...................................... writem more

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It happened when my son and his friends came inside the house when I was getting out of the shower.soon I opened bathroom door that is when I froze when they looked at me son said to his friends fresh cunt guys.before I could close the door they picked me up put me on living room floor started to sucking my nipples and cunt told them to stop that is when my sons friend shoved his cock in my mouth and right down my throat then my son shoved his cock in my cunt started to fucked me.his friend kept his cock in my throat then came causing me to gag.he. once he pulled out of my throat caught my breath started to say something my son pumped his cum in me then his friends took turns unloading in me.they kept fucking me for three hours doing me dp triple in my cunt and one in my ass.after they were donefucking me my son thanks mom once his friends left my son came back and said to me hope your pregnant well two weeks later I was.told my son he said good now we can watch your belly grow and at the sametime my friends and me will be fucking you more.he told me him and his friends plan getting pregnant to give them six kids.

True 5 star story. It would be good to hear how the reception and rest of the trip went. Thank you

She should have remembered her sisters fix for a cumm dripping cunt, and deep throated his cock when he told her that he was ready. Or she could have taken him up on eating her out afterwords. Then she could have cumm in his mouth and then they both could have enjoyed the taste of their combined juices.

I love the story of love between a mother and son . I would like to see the love story continue with the love and devotion as shown in your story .

That is so hot. Next chapter should include a mother aunt and son three some. Wish I could have the chance to have hot incest sex with my hot mom

Its exilent. Proper description and development. But disappointed too. Mom and son should have a foursome with new made bride and groom. Or even mother and son should marry to each other at same place with the requested by all. But some butt fucking ismust.

I liked it but there was thing missing should said that his mom got pregnant .my aunt went on vacation together nudist resort where everything went on my aunt slept in same bed she was laying on her back so I took advantage got on top of her slid my cock in her cunt began to fuck her told get off me said no you feel good told about ready to cum pull out get me pregnant then it happened buried my cock in her deep and cum big load I looked at said that nice to cum in you even told your marriage now ruined told just think now we are going fuck every day as husband and wife she was 35 of age and me 25 we still live together have 2 kids together

there's room for more

Your writing is almost believable. You should continue writing. Thank you for using Mom not Mommy.

Hope your mom and you still fucking each other did she ever get knocked up

Congratulations!

I loved it. I wish the mother was a little bit more reluctant, though. The first handjob occured too easily. She needed more pressure before engaging into anything sexual. The fact that they got caught spiced up the story.

It was sweet of the mother to offer to give her son a hand job. Great story, well written, I like how the initial tension is maintained and then released through their agreement.

This is the first light hearted, fun incest story I have ever read. It was well written and logical. Although fiction, having lived and traveled all over the world, this story sadly but accurately depicts the uptight American when traveling abroad.

Good story. Spelling suggestion: It should be fazed, not phased. The latter refers to the kind of phase that people pass through.

HOT HOT HOT

nice and love it. if there is a video as like as the story

Very hot story! Love how it progressed to full fucking! Would love an invitation to that wedding

Wow! This was hot !

Strangely hot. Would have loved to hear more about the mother's history...