All Comments on 'Nakedgirl 01: The Story of Dareen'

It might have been better if you had split this up into nine separate chapters. It's a bit long to read in one sitting.

Hope there is more. Love the story. Agree could have split it up but still good

Showed promise for several pages, but towards the end was decidedly not erotic. Disappointing for those who stuck with it to the end.

Please continue the story!!! I like where it's going.

You just can't leave her (and us!) hanging like that...

Wow, this ending is a bummer. The child in me loves a naked superhero story but it sucks it ended like that.