All Comments on 'Narcissus' Second Chance'

i wanted to see them have sex:) the start is quite enchanting. i have a thing for beautiful immortal men (ok, who doesn't?) and i liked how you made narcissus's plight so sympathetic -- self-absorption mixed with unrequited love. the repeated question at the end made me think of echo, but she has nothing to do with this, right? anyways, i adore re-imaginings of myths, and really enjoyed this.