by Rabbithabitdrc
This is well written. There’s a nice background story and a good meet-up, but the end was abrupt and the story doesn’t feel complete. There’s a lot more story that could be told about their encounter and where they decide to take their relationship, if there really is one. The other thing is that city’s name appears in the title, but there’s practically nothing in the story to really tie it into the tale. A second chapter would be welcomed.
Thanks for writing.