All Comments on 'Nasty Sexy Gym Morning'

Get a proof reader,

What a waste of time

Great potential, but lacks detail and far too many mistakes. Yes get an editor.

This story might have promise f you found a partner in writing to fill in much needed details and correct language.

And I see your score has soared up to 3.14 from 2.96 due to the sympathy scoring you must be receiving.

The story is awful

it needed more depth with the details

yeah you did a good job ny writing but no end its awful mate. you need to find a way for proper ending

There is a lack of grammatical skill in this story. You should at least proof read your work before submitting.

However, even if the grammar was correct the story still is thin in plot development.

But the worst part is the ending or more specifically the lack of one. It reads as if your mommy walked into the room so you hit submit.

too many grammatical and spelling mistakes to waste my time on.