All Comments on 'Natalia and Her Wolf Ch. 04'

Wow...that was fast..I just read your last chapter...I love it. And here you are posting a new one...thank u very much. Take a break you deserve it...but keep writing too...just love your story

That was an excellent chapter I look forward to the next!!! So I am guessing she is pregnant! Hope he finds her soon and the pack adopts the three orphans.

I'm so happy that Eric is not dead!!! 5Stars!!!!

Please keep writing. Love this story. And the way vanessa died - nice. I look forward to seeing where you take us with this. Hope to see another update soon. What can i say, I'm impatient and greedy. Lol

Story and writing...better each chapter. :)

I like what you're trying to say but I find your writing style a little difficult to follow. I have to keep back tracking to make sure i've not missed something.

The pace is perfect...writing is getting better each story!! Can't wait to read more

So Eric is alive sweet! Is Natalia Prego?... Sickness + Belly Bump = Baby in my mind. Also the supper motherly feeling for the homeless kids suggest this too. All in all great read keep it going

Seriously thought Eric was dead for awhile there. Glad you brought him back I didn't really honk this could just be the end of them but yah never know. Cant? Wait to read the rest. Lol cant wait to read of Natalias reaction when she sees Eric again!!

rushed, rushed, rushed.....

It has gotten so much better you have slowed down a lot and theres more detail than when you first started the story , but some parts are still rushed and I have to back track to re read because the story jumps in some places... all in all keep it up love the story

just read the last four chapters, i have enjoyed them.¶ glad you have a laptop charger now. ¶ I think you are doing great. they need to stop whining, and give constructive feedback. LuvKaiLynn, great improvements and way to take the negativity in stride. it feels like you have hit a bit of a groove. on the earlier chapter breaks you could have let them flow more smoothly but what is a chapter for if not to move on....¶ Great job so far and keep it up :)

Love the changes you made. More complex story. Love the characters. Thanks

So I don't normally write comments. But the way you have rewritten this story is really good. Keep up the good work and post the next section as soon as possible.

That being said... When you have Natalia saying "Madre de Meho" are you trying to say "mother of god"? If so then you could possibly say "madre de dios".

I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I have enjoyed reading your story and watching your progress the more you write the better you seem to get. I can't wait to read the next chapter please don't forget the details on Eric getting the pack back on track.