All Comments on 'Natalia: The Honeytrap Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It was labeled mind control, but there was no mind control in the story. It was disappointing.

aRandom1aRandom1over 8 years agoAuthor
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My apologies Anonymous, the mind control elements are intended to be reasonably subtle and indirectly manifested by the different view via the camera.

Sothe101Sothe101over 8 years ago
Fantastic

I thought it was incredible... The pull between morality and need, the unique perspective using the camera... I was very impressed. Loved the subtle control too. I'll definitely be back for more.

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