All Comments on 'Natalia's Wolf Ch. 03'

what is this girl yakuza

Luv

I'm glad her mums dead cuz she got what she deserves but I thank it's a bit harsh on natalia both her parents in 4months and it's a total mood kill on her date :/ other than that I love the story please don't leave it so long for the next one.I can't wait for more keep up the fantastic work xxxx

Such a cliff hanger! I love your style. Thanks.

i am totally lost as to why ther mother is such a bitch and how if her parents were divorced her mom had any say over her dad house if nat is over 18? now her mom has been decapitated and we have no reason to see it coming since we have not had any back history yet.

Totally didnt see that one coming!

@anonymous: 'yakuza' comment funny as hell! Lmao!

It's a twist cuties lol but ill give you guys a spoiler.. She isn't dead lol you'll see why

Well I think the part about them walking out then a box and a head could of been written smoother, I feel like there was a few missing words and connection pieces. Otherwise good job. :)

OOOMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG didnt see that coming

That I had no idea was coming.

do you want to give me a heart attack? that was so unexpected. And i loved it.

U SHOCKED THE HELL OUT OF ME. BUT I WOULD HAVE SERVED IT ON A PLATTER WITH ALL THE TRIMMING. LOVED THE SHOCK.

There are twists and then there are TWISTS. Very confused.

grade A ending, need more endings like that

Ding dong the bitch is dead!

What the hello!!!!!!!#

How the hell you got it spaced so perfect that the last line was on the next page. That was awesome. And that poor Eric can't catch a break.

Oh, yeah, too bad about the mom. She died before she realized that she might love her daughter. Or it could be a complete relief for Tal that she doesn't have to deal with the bitch anymore. Often times moms don't like girl children. Give them away or leave them behind.