All Comments on 'Natalie'

really good, loved the punch in the jaw especially

beautifully written and emoted...

I have to say.It was amazing that the Nice Guy finally wins one.

Very, very nice.

Romantic and funny, I enjoyed it a lot.

talk about breeding yourself out of the gene pool! i guess that is why super helpful people are so rare!

Can't say enough about your stories. Please keep posting.

Can't say enough about your stories. Please keep posting.

I loved this story when I first read it, and I still love it!

This Horny 'ol Sailor says thank you for a job well done. I loved the humor and the fact that it ended the way a good love story ought to end. Ronnie W.

Very well written and loved the well placed humor!

I got to get me a dog and a girl like that!

as this is the second time you've touched my soul with this wonderful story you wrote for me. And although the first version was beautiful - this one hugged me even tighter than before. Knowing this came first from your heart through your very talented mind and then your equally talented hand, I am having a very difficult time expressing myself {you would never think that could happen, would you? lol} I am just so deeply grateful for being blessed with you in my life, dear friend. I truly love you. Know this.

I loved it the very first time I read it... years ago.. and I don't love it any less now... thanks for reposting and refreshing my memory. and hey man.. KEEP EM COMING!!! ;-)

If Sancho was as intelligent as the dog, I'd marry him and skip Dulcinea.

On secoind thought, his breath sticks and he farts alot, but then again so does a dog.

I'm sure Dulcinea's farts don't stink, but I decline to find out...

Loved the story!

Man

Just the hint of sex, a touch of humor and a smart dog to boot. I would have loved to have Rosie as a Mother-in-law.

I'm hoping to meet my 'Natalie' sometime in the near future.

Hey Kirk-man. Thanks for very cool story that got me rooting for the underdog. I always love a good fun little story that infuses realistic but quirky personalities. Throw in a bit of subtle romance, cool dialogue, and intriguing characters mixed with humor and you've got a great narrative. I've saved this as one of my favorites. I'd love to read similar genres to this one. A refreshing change from the typical romance stories.

Very inspiring. I was laughing alot at the realism of it.

Very wonderful style :)

Loved Jack! The only one in the story that had any sense!

What a charming story in a fucked-up world. Well done!

But this was so sweet. It has such a kind and warm voice. Like a friend you truly care for. So much heart. Please keep writing.....

This was one entertaining and enjoyable story. Another comment summed it up perfectly, 'a sweet story'. It is so nice to read a story about true love and it was very imaginative. I like stories that are different. Thank you for a wonderful story.

yes, a bit of a fairy tale, but believable. I think everyone's heard the saying no good deed goes unpunished. she stopped the good deed for her own reason, which was a good deed for him.

Lost several girlfriends like that. Always believed they loved me, not to be. The leap of faith can be costly. The rewards to the true of heart is eternal......someday.

Very good story, and Jack was a hoot. But I’m afraid that if he were my dog, he’d have to go. No way am I living with a dog that’s smarter than me. I really liked the story though. Thanks.

As another comment put it: a bit of a fairytale, but good people. 4* I guess it's OK for things to work out well for people in a story - especially if they are good people.