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by LongJake

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IMaculateIMaculateover 6 years ago
Great!

You manage to insert humor into what is a very sexy tease of a story. You also have a great command of the language and a natural and engaging style. I'm dying to read more about this relationship. Nice work.

OnlyTheBonelyOnlyTheBonelyabout 6 years ago
Ya

I love this story. I love the fact that it never occurs to him that she could be turned on too - his innocence makes us root for him.

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