All Comments on 'Natalie Fills In'

Love any story with the Ice queen, Natalie, taking over. Maybe it's time for her to corrupt Nicole. Maybe Nicole's in Mr. Herrick's class and Nat wants to take Nicole down a few notches so she puts aside her hatred of Mr. Herrick for a little bit to do that.

The lead-up to the sex wasn't at all boring like so many are and the dialogue was very good and believable. If Nicole couldn't figure out what was going on when she came home she needs to take some lessons from Natalie - or better still, from her brother.

Perhaps this wasn't a typical Valentine's Day love story but it sure was a sexy one. Five stars for certain and for sure! Thank you!

How about adding Nicole to the story?

Can't wait for the next chapter

You sick fuck.

Natalie becomes more human in this lovely tale of sibling disfunction and connection. Well done.