All Comments on 'Nate & I Ch. 05'

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kmillerk1kmillerk1about 9 years ago
Hope you aren't done with the story

There is still lots more to write, :) Please continue, you have done a wonderful job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Perfect to say the least.

Wow. Not many high school narrations end up being great, but this is on a whole other scale of amazing. From the ultra relatable chatacters (even Brent!) to the vivid sex scenes this proves you should never be afraid to speak your mind, and that true love is truly possible! I hope Nate's dad patches things up with him, even though this is only a piece of fiction, which makes this such an amazing story because it all seemed so real. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Awesome!!!

5 Stars for me and I read these all the time! I want you to continue just so I can find out more about their lives ahead!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good tale

Thoroughly enjoyed this series overall even though I thought the last chapter was a tad unrealistic, especially the shout-outs at graduation. I do like HEA though. The post-graduation sex could have gone on a lot longer and I would have liked that too. I do read this stuff as a turn-on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Continue...please!

From the timid popular guy to the sad and ashamed to be gay boy and finally to the fully confident homosexual. The story was great not lacking a single detail I love each character as if I know them personally. I really do hope we all could find out what happens at that reunion😊!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
more narrative needed

This is definitely one of the best stories I've read on literotica.com The way in which you brought in the separate individual's feeling was excellent; and, the ways you treated the guys who didn't like gays was exceptional since all gays have experienced

it but it's often omitted in the many stories found here. As this was high school guys, as the primary characters, it surely dealt with individuals being trapped in situations such as high school which seem to be so important at the time as compared to the next few years as guys mature. Even at this late date, I would really like to find out

what really happens with Oliver and Nate, once they're definitely on their own. I'm hopeful that you'll add one or more chapters even though a year has passed since the last one was presented.t

gayswallowergayswalloweralmost 8 years ago
each other

I like how they are in love.

Keena912Keena912over 7 years ago
More stories like this!

I just love stories that I can relate too. It's not just sex it's romance, humor, bigotry and so much more. I hate reading stuff where it's just all sex and there's no emotional connection at all. I'm a hopeless romantic, male on male is my favorite kind of love story and you had both here. Is this really it? I'd love to see more stories or even a book like this. Great great job, and much love to you and your work! ❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I loved this story, but would like to have seen these two get back at Brent, and the rest of the jerks in their school. Even a straight guy would be stupid to have sex with some girl he didn't know at a party on a dare.

mfa607mfa607over 5 years ago

Loved this story too! An epilogue would be awesome! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I NEED MORE 😢

Omg this was such a sweet ending, but i wish there was more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Do they live happily ever after?

Does Nate's Dad realise his homophobia is due to latent homosexual tendencies?

Perhaps Jake changed his mind because his sibling wants to transition?

Does Nate's Dad hook up with the coach?

Kat simply must be coming out as LGBT too.

Is Brent an asshole because he's a victim of a handsy preist?

What happened to the suggestion of a football scholarship?

There's another chapter to this story surely.

NymzanSusaurenNymzanSusaurenalmost 5 years ago
Great

Well, I loved it. Knew I would...I read in order of dates posted. I will get into the rest. Hope they are as well written as this one. I will definately favorite you...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

This series made me so damn sad. Really well written

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