All Comments on 'Nathan and Holly Ch. 02'

I love it when things go slow and proceed naturally, they were taking it at just the right pace and enjoyed the time they had to the fullest. Even not having actual sex was perfectly justified, fresh and tender love takes time and just screwing each other would ruin the image.

The cliffhanger ending though shocked me in a very good way, I actually didn't expect that you'll go the rout of them being discovered. Of course being accepted and encouraged isn't bad either so I can't wait for the next chapter.

5* of course!

Who is David??

Although, it was a little too "Dick & Jane" for me. (See spot run, etc.)

So, that being said, I eagerly await Chapter 2.

p.s. I, too, want to know, "Who the Hell is David?

That was probably the writer getting this story mixed up with "Wedding Party" one of his previous works. The brother is named David.

Please keep going, I want to read about how they get together again and what happens down the way a bit.

Please keep going. I am eagerly awaiting the next part.

Loved this story even though you made a mistake OR did you.. Nathan became David in the heat of the moment or was David actually Hollys last bang, just wondering. Either way you have to continue with this amazing story it's far from finished. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Well done..

you need to keep this going don't end it like that

Why are so many good stories left unfinished !

Rapier

I agree with Rapier875