All Comments on 'Natural'

No one gives a damn, old timer. You sound like some old geezer sitting around on a bench in the park, telling anyone who will listen, "Why, back in my day..." God! Give your jaw a fucking rest.

I've never understood why personal attacks are a thing in the comment section.

Enjoyable. Not really my thing. But well written.

5 star to piss off the haters.

I lasted 10 paragraphs

I made it about halfway through. I appreciate that the narrator acknowledges that he’s rambling, and I understand that we’re supposed to immerse ourselves into this rambling monologue in order to appreciate the story. I just couldn’t get into it, though.

I think this could be an interesting story about a couple dancing along the thin line of monogamy through visits to the massage parlor. Add a little structure, and this could be a thought-provoking and erotic tale. Maybe it is already? I’ll never know.

Why do you have to dance along , or cross over the thin line of monogamy for it to be a good story? Can't couples have fun within their limits, without being unfaithful. Guess it just pisses off the cucks and swingers if you don't embrace their deviant fantasies.

If this is a lead up to something more then I will wait to rate the complete story. If this is the complete story then I missed it. Hope it was good for you.

That premise has been a favorite of yours. But you've beaten it flatter than hammered shit

It must have taken a big effort to hold back your erecting cock, perhaps you could have taken into consideration that the woman also needed a little fun for her long time working in such a hot weather. As we Chinese know, to have fun alone is not so nice as with company, and as another saying says, since you are on your knees, then why not offer a kowtow to show your respect because it doesn't cost you too much? Haha, for your reference.

memoirs.:) I like your stories, I enjoy your stories, they are realistic, real and to me quite erotic. I have given more massages than received. :( Oh well ,what will be will be. Have any humorous massage stories to tell. :) I enjoy a good laugh too.

Ah Danny me boy, you are a much stronger man than I. A beautiful woman naked upon you, stroking your dick and her sexy ass a tongue's length away and you resisted. I could not have been so strong, I would have tasted her.

I enjoy your style of story telling. It is refreshing compared to the senseless drivel of most wanna be writers.

Please continue regaling us with your insights to your life and ignore the vile comments of the anonymous momma boys.