All Comments on 'Naughty Housekeeping'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
And what happens in Paris?

Very nice and worth a second chapter. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Next chapter Romance

I think chapter 2 should be all about falling in love in Paris. Drop the money for service and raise the mutusl affection and passion. They need each other.

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
A good question

If she takes the money, and at what cost. I thought Lindsey was a clever girl, she didn't clean much. I didn't think Davids first proposal was so immoral, and she had the right and choice to decline. A girls cheeks always look better with a deep blush. *~*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

Well written and very sensual. More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantasy

Lovely story can't wait for chapter 02

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