All Comments on 'Naughty in the Nightclub Ch. 02'

I'm glad you decided to accept public feedback, because I have to say:

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DAMN!

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That was hot!

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The way you describe the feelings, and the passion, and how certain things affect you and get you even hotter, is some of the best writing I've ever read.

There are certain authors (erotic or otherwise) that can write in such a way as to get the reader completely inside their head, and you're definitely one of them.

Keep up the good work.