All Comments on 'Naughty Little Hook Up'
by Smuttyandfun
- 5 Comments
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoVery hot story. A few minor spelling issues. Right at the beginning 'what a tool' her ex is/was. Good story overall. Going to read your other stuff now. Would love a chapter 2.
3 stars
DragonRider55
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWhat is wrong with 'what a tool'??
It is a perfectly good expression of how much a useless PoS someone is.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoAdd 10 years to Alexis' age and 17 years to Tom's, and you have my ex-GF and me. We never got around to 69, but managed every other position mentioned here. I've never enjoyed cunnilingus more than I did with her, and her screams of ecstasy told me that I was doing it right. She was an astonishing fellatrix -- my 59th birthday present was getting the best blowjob of my life from my gorgeous, naked, 34-year-old lover. We eventually broke up, and the age gap was probably part of the reason. Please see if Chapter 2 can be about Tom and Alexis finding a way to make it work.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA very enjoyable and hot story. Look forward to having him take her unprotected, and that may lead to more parts.
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