All Comments on 'Naughty Secrets Bk. 01'

I'm just saying. do 1/2 brothers even count as incest? I know legally, but in erotica? Not for me. I don't like violence against women for any reason, which is why I read incest/taboo, and not NON CONSENT RAPE VIOLENCE against helpless victims.

Prolly safe to say I didn't care for your story.

Perhaps a disclaimer in the beginning like good authors put, explaining this story contains RAPE and VIOLENCE against Women. That way I could close it.

By all means write away, don't stop on my account, but consider letting us know you enjoy being raped so we can make a choice. Thanks, RigaTony

this was a non consent story not incest its poorly writen and should be removed from this site and the author banned from any other submitions

Quickly. I agree with the above statements. The "fine line" between nonconsent and rape ... once she stated she didn't know her half brothers well enough it was pushing toward rape.

Make an effort to develop a relationship between the characters first, develop good/loving feelings for each other.

The main character isn't raped. She is restrained at first but if you notice after that she enjoys it. So I don't consider that to be rape. I'm sorry for anyone that may be offended by that. Have brothers like step or adopted siblings are considered incest/taboo. But the genre was changed to non-conesnt. The main character hated that they were there. If this was going to be a novel I would have included more about their relationship

The definition of rape is gaining sexual knowledge of another person through force or intimidation. This story is a rape. That is why I did not even read the complete first page and will not read anything further in this series.

Great story! Non-con, twin step brothers and a little bdsm, loved it. Thanks for writing it!

Agree with the others about it being rape and also assault and false imprisonment - wonder about how the brothers were raised if they think women who like sex are automatically whores.

This was rape. She repeatedly said no, but they did things anyway. However, this is the non-consent-stories section. If you're going to have rape, this is the section to put it in. I am sure the brothers were not justified in their punishment. And why shouldn't she be bugged by them. Also, loving sex does not make someone a whore. She already cooked for them and apparently did it every night. They pretended to offer to cook. I was bugged by the way she seemed to truly turn by the end. Also, a woman can end up or gaming from a rape and say she enjoys it by the end if she doesn't think it will stop by the end, but it's still rape if at any time she said no and meant it. Which she didm

Let's not forget this isn't a documentary site people. no actual humans were raped as a result of this story.

I enjoyed the dominance and control and the way she finally embraced her role as a sub.

The piece was well written and the dialogue was great.

Wonder if daddy will wake up to investigate the noises coming from her room, and she'll get all three holes filled at once??!!

sexiest story I've read in a long time

It all seemed ludicrous because there wasn't any sign before the act itself that she was attracted to them in any way. Yes, I get that it is fantasy but there are ways to make it appear believable and that's not the case with this one.