All Comments on 'Naughty Selfies with Sister'

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HeyAllHeyAllalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

Special thanks to thewinedarksea for some editing work. You can find her hardcore work here:

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=4268961&page=submissions

Thanks to another editor who did some work and wanted to remain nameless.

Most importantly, thanks to all readers for checking this out. I hope you've enjoyed it.

Heyall

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

That was hot. Hopefully you'll continue this story.

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallalmost 6 years ago
Inventive, fun and steaming hot as always!

I don't skip any new stories you post because I know I'm going to have a good read.

You are a sure value and always very imaginative and I'm a fan!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

This was a great brother/sister story.

Beautifly written and a good pace. Chris should have gotten a chance to give her a few lapping...but then again, leaving your reader wanting more is always a great technique.

5 stars from this reader! 😉

Josie

sexlover66sexlover66almost 6 years ago
Wonderful

Hope there may be another chapter coming ...resolving the modeling contract...but insisting that she only work with the fluffer that got those amazing reactions in Spain....

5 stars

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 6 years ago
Hot

Incest is not normally the genre I read, but this was hot, and well done.

LothlosLothlosalmost 6 years ago
Awesome Story

Hope there is a chapter two

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 6 years ago
Smoldering!!!!

Sooooo HOT!!!!

KhorybannefinKhorybannefinalmost 6 years ago
Very hot

I like the slow workup to get to the actual fucking. It worked really well and i think it actuallymade it hotter. Good job!

JagnagJagnagalmost 6 years ago
Nice one ...

That was friggin hot, you have a skill at holding a readers attention..

Really enjoyed your story

Hot as hell

5* 🤗🤗🤗

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
5 stars

Another chapter please.

HarrytheDrivenHarrytheDrivenalmost 6 years ago
another please?

would love to see more of these characters. super hot story, keep on keepin on.

CrimsonDragonVCrimsonDragonValmost 6 years ago
Definitely needs a sequel

I’m up for reading more of this, imo it needs another chapter, I’m a relatively new fan of your stories and this my friend, needs to be a full story, not just a single chapter.

Hope you make it, and thanks for the chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Need much more !!!!!!!!

That was fantastic. Need much more please

JimjonkJimjonkalmost 6 years ago
More

Definitely scope for a lot more!

starbanestarbanealmost 6 years ago
More please!

Please add more. Great story. Thank you!!

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventureralmost 6 years ago
Damn!

This is why you're one of my favorite Authors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Story

I Want to know if she got the job? and what was the result of the clip video she sent? did they find out she was fucking her brother? Was wondering if your going to do a part 2 final conclusion of the story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
She forgot to give Bro his reward. five licks of her swollen pussy

Very Good story wish it had a second chapter and both her and her brother enjoy a brief family vacation of sleeping with each other for a whole week end when family go away and leave them alone. He can lick her pussy to his hearts content and fuck his sisters pussy till he he gets tired and falls asleep! Next morning He can wake her up gently licking her pussy to orgasm and then fucking her with his morning hard on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good Job

It's difficult to write a short story that has a build up, but you managed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot story

just one small thing did she get the job and does she give her bother a job too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very very hot!Fucking your sister is something EXTRAORDINARY!!!Itss really different when you fuck other girls.ALL THOSE who have experienced sex with their sisters will agree with me.

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlalmost 2 years ago

weird but in a good way. Hot and not untrue of what models will do for that big contract.

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Incredibly written.

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