All Comments on 'Naval Dilemma'

You,sir,are an accomplished author.

I try to read your new stories and when there aren't any I go to your older writings.

I love it! Well done. =]

Well written with defined characters and an interesting story line. The historic setting makes for a good backdrop. What more could we want? It's always nice to see you post a new one.

As usual, another well written short story! Hope you're working on the next chapter so we can find out who he shall choose as a lover.

Sorry author, but they did not have jets at Pearl Harbor

this guy must be truly fukked up if he couldn't decide between somebody who wanted to own and torture him and someone who wanted to love and be partners with him. he obviously deserves the owned/tortured for even thinking about not accepting the love/partnership....then the lt. can leave him tied up for a week and he'll die of thirst and starvation- but at least he'll go with his memories of being tied up and beaten with a riding crop and having his face grinded into the floor, etc...

i hope you don't have the same psychological affliction as your character

Is there a sequal of this story?

You created the great atmosphere of drunken sailors, testosterone filled, raunchy, and seedy sex for your character's Ano'i, Dutch, and Lt. Richard Randolph. I could smell, see, and feel the life they were going through. You added nice depth to Ano'i when he protected and advised the young blonde pimply boy. Was pleased that your characters survived the Japanese attack at Pearl Harbor. I very much enjoyed the story and characters. Your sex scenes were diverse, vivid and exciting. I loved Ano'i's dilemma. It added a believable tension throughout the later part of the story.