All Comments on 'Navy Wife Pt. 01'

part I was great.. but Part II.. still waiting

Thank you all for the feedback. Part II is in the works and I hope to have it submitted in the next few days! Please check back!

I apologize, I meant to hit 5 stars but the damn button wouldnt let me undo the 1 star I hit accidentally. Great story, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Great start ... but please part 2 sooner rather than later now that you've built it up like this,

Wow! What an awesome tease. You need to finish the next part sooner rather than later.

I normally don't respond but this one hits home. My "girls" found each other when I was deployed (and one of my old shipmates). I think its a lot more common than people realize

not everyone realizes what a wife or husband goes through when they marry a person who is in the military, and then are left alone for months while their mate goes away, but can't wait for the next part

Mmm I like where this is going. I'm ready for part two.

I thought more would happen. I wanted page 2. Now I'm anxious for Part 02! Nice tease! You've got me wanting more. Five stars! Thanks.