by patmc098
Wow! Well written + erotic parts =hot as fuck. I know you state this is a true tale, which would also make it limited. But you need to give us more.of this, even if you have to take 'artistic liscense' going forward. Very good!
but I am wondering why the husband is writing this and not his wife, I know you told us in the first part, but still the wife should be the one telling this story since it did happen to her and not the husband, but oh well, it is a good story no matter who is writing it
I know this is somewhat cathartic but we are curious I think about your actual opinions. You are writing for her, but will she be writing for herself and will you write for yourself as well?
This story does emphasize how rough military deployments are for families and that might be a good voice to hear also, from some of the people involved.
we will add more to your story thru our imagination, much more than you can change what happened in real life, this is lacking a little in sensual detail, but I still love it.
The ladies in the story make wonderful music together . Colton will come back with with all kinds of issues . Mental issues that will render his camo dick inadequate.
How about Navy Wife Pt. 02.5 first: More encounters between the wives, including toys
Its been 4 years and no part 3 yet, it has been a fantastic story so far so bring on # 3