All Comments on 'Naya's Journey'

this was a fab story had me rivetted from start to finish ... a second installment would be nice so im hoping yu carry it on otherwise the title really will be true,, well done i enjoyed immensly

I love the story and it is wonderful. The way I have understood the lifestyle was liking shame while really in the story it is the freedom that comes from losing shame. Anyway, back to the ending, I wanted becky to just get left behind while knowin te truth. Damien and naya could become a high profile couple with a fake story of meeting each other by chance and Naya becoming a cinderella. I think the perfect ending would be them at a party and they sneak off with her reminesing about what has happened and doing the same necklace thing. However I see why you wrote as you did and I respect it. Awesome story. Thanks!

This was truly amazing! I've been looking for somethigg like this for a while. Pleasse keep it up!!

The best I've read in a long time.

This story awakened things in me that I didn't know existed. I loved the intimacy of the friendships, and the emphasis on moving beyond shame. And it was nice how all of the characters truly cared for one another, how all of their activities were predicated upon mutual trust. I've never been in a BDSM relationship but I have to imagine this is the ideal that is embodied by the culture, and it's an ideal not often enough represented on this website. The only thing that troubled me was that the story seemed to represent women having educational/career success as a negative. I don't see why these women have to abandon their intellectual lives to realize this fantasy. If all I did all day was fuck, I would get bored pretty damned fast.

if disney did bdsm this would be the type of story they would look for.

not often you read a bdsm tale that

has you smiling.

Is not to shocking.

is entertaining & fun.

leaves you with a warm glow.

.. no guilt , no crash.

story reads like an expression of the Authors own fantasys & desires.

i think thats cute. its well written with an interesting plot & fun storyline , delightful characters , minimal typo's & errors ..

i really liked it , good story to print out & leave laying around if you are thinking of some tie & tease with your partner & are unsure of how to broach the subject.

no harm / no foul ..

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

The absolute best story I've read on here yet. This is beautiful. I've never wished to be dominated before now, but I think this has given me something to look forward to.

That was so good. Brilliantly written with just enough of a story line.

Briljant, briljant!

A perfect plot

well written

wow!

so beautiful, you have an amazing talent for language!