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malonehamburg over 13 years ago

Fantastic

your story is absolutly fantastic. I love NCIs and I love your story. Ziva David is a fucking hot woman. I'm waiting for more news from NCIS. Ziva with McGee and Tony? with Gibbs? A fan from germany.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

great story but when Mcgee was in the room with the dealer i think u mixed up a sentence. "You're the first person not to read my name tag and ogle at my breast" wasn't sure if that was intentional or not.

acerdrive over 13 years agoAuthor

@anonymous

actually there was no mix up, I clearly noted it was her talking when I put ",her soft voice sent shivers through his body". but thanks for the comment.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Your editor needs a proof reader!

"it's the least I cold of down" could have done? and, and, and. What a mess.

btw $600. does not make you a VIP and get you a room "with".

james1801 7 months ago

No fun for Catherine? What a waste. 😢

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6/8/11 Hey, if anyone is happening to keep me as a favorite author for my "The Texter" Series. I'd like to say after a year of haitus from the Texter series(well I wrote a celebrity parody of NCIS which I must insist you read!), I have finally finished up the next c...

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