by QuietLion
well i do hope u continue....at this pace.
hopefully not too quick.
story in the incest category...it should be in the mistreated women kind....
You need to get rid rid of Max or fix his rig to blow up and Jason should show Mom what kind of man he is so she can know what kind of lover he can be to her .
continue but make it longer.
I liked the start of this story. Wish it had more to it but I guess thats chapter 2. Don't make us wait too long for the next installment.
I know you're setting up a story, but really, what kind of child, regardless of gender, would say "sure, I'll move out and leave you alone with the abusive (mentally and physically, in front of other people no less!) drunk man. I'm sure nothing bad will come of that for you, mum?" I'm not saying don't finish this, but the son is kind of condemning her to getting her ass kicked by leaving. I guess you can chalk it up to "18 year olds are stupid" but I don't think I was stupid enough at 18 to let my mother stay in a situation like that, even if she said she was having a blast dodging china being hurled around.
This has potential... don't pay attetion to the nay-sayers... develop the plot and the characters. Mom has the makings of a "red-hot mama" and her son could give her what she needs... some 'safe' D/s.