All Comments on 'Negative Space Ch. 10'

I'm enjoying each chapter more than the last. I particularly like the addition of the weres.

Great fun and very well done.

is the type of human we should all be. She treats everyone w/respect regardless of who they are. What a world it could be!

I don't know where to start, you have so much going on. I usually feel the story going in a certain direction, but this chapter has me stumped because so much is going on. oh well here goes anyway. Will Lana give Prometheus a chance? Will he try and force her to stop treating the Were's? Will Elliot's research be successful? Will Lana continue to feel uncomfortable in the human world? What's up w/her and Knox? See so many different directions.

I find myself really excited about the next chapter and where you take the story next, so get to work!!!!!!!! demanding aren't I

I really liked this story in the beginning but I've kind of hated the last 3 chapters. I wish her and Theo could have worked or talked things out. I don't like that she is just horny for vampires in general. I do like the addition of the weres though. I'm interested to see where u take this story, but i'm hoping to see more direction soon.

Lana has certainly started to make her mark as a physician to the supernatural world. Why does she smell so appealing to vampires and what is this strange ability she has? Could that make her sexually vulnerable to vampires?