by samslam
Man that wasamazing I sat down and read all 9 pages. It's one of the best piece of erotica i have read in years.
Great continuation. Between these two chapters and Black Woman Fantasy, I have to put you on my Favorite Authors list. Terrific descriptions of the women and the sex. Keep up the good work.
I give! You've made me late for work because I just couldn't stop reading until I was done. Thanks for such an awesomely hot read.
That was breathtaking.u certainly know how to write.great stuff mate.u r number 1 on my author list.
Thanks for the story. You are
my favorite author! Can't wait for more...
I haven't make love to a black woman for over fifty years.
You have brought back many pleasant memories that have been forgotten; I hope you keep writing.
All I have to say is that is one of the best stories ive ever read. I found the first chapter a few days ago and couldnt wait to get back to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work and get tp work on posting chapter 3
This is one of the hottest series at Literotica!
Come on, Samslam, you KNOW that Barbara has to feel the heat. We have to see Chapter 3!
I am begging you to write the next part.i am a big fan of you.
CHAPTER THREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! i absolutly LOVE this series, its reminds me of...myself actually. although he has some better adventures @.@ lucky bastard. i beg of you chapter three!!!!!!!
There wouldn't be a better way to learn english. making a list of new words and verbs... and at the same time getting the best of the erotic stories i have ever read. Thanks samslan
You need to write chapter 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, etc. I LOVED both of the chapters. You are a true genius. I swear, I've never been so horny while just reading something! Make more!!! Please!!
This is the 1st comment I've ever left. This series is too great to not comment. I'm curious about Barbara also, but sure wouldn't want ruin Jasmine plot. Thank you.
I almost didn't read the second installment of this series because seduction and build up of the first was a major part of my enjoyment. I anticipated the second would be just some "servicing" of the other women. But I was not in the least disappointed as samslam wrote an entirely original continuation of the story. The new developments of Shelly's lust for Cyn, and of Jasmine's breakup (and watching Amber and Jimmy on the rebound) and Mike's subsequent pursual of Jasmine were delightful.
VERY ER0TiC! i WAS REALLY SAD T0 SEE THiS CHAPTER D0NE WiTH...
i'M REALLY EXCiTED T0 SEE WHAT WiLL HAPPEN NEXT!!!
FIRST THING IS TO SAY THANKS SAMSLAM GREAT WRITING STORY LINE THE SWITCHING FROM AMBER TO CYN TO SHELLY THAN ADDING BARBRA HUMMM HOPE U GET HER TAKEING CARE OF HAHAHAHA OK ILL SAY ONE MORE THING ITS BEEN YEARS SINCE IVE HAD MULT.HARDON,S JUST FROM READING A SEX STORY AN THANKS AGAIN LOOKING FORWAR TO READING YOUR OTHER STORY,S THANKS SAM OCHARLEY
Samslam, fantastic work, this was argubly the best white dick/black chick story I've ever read, seriously hot, needs a finale with cyn & shelly and drag in barbara for some anal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And more jasmine.
this is one of the best stories i have ever read !! omg i have never been so hot over a story i can not wait to see what happens next
I would love for you to continue with this storyline. It was absolutely fantastic
is that really the end?? no!!! cant be. please do continue......
why in everything holy did you stop here this story was getting more and more juicy by the sentence please oh please make one more chapter or even a couple more
everyone else wants it to happen
if not it was an amazing story well writing and well just a bloody brilliant read
this was just starting to get good with the confrontation with dear ole aunt cyn. lol. would be great if mike and jasmine stayed together maybe even she forgets to take pill again and actually gets pregnant. lol. little later in story though. possibly have jimmy get amber pregnant. have him turn out to be a lying little bastard. lol. only down side to that would be hurting amber. anyway im sure you have prolly been given tons of ideas. later sam
This was a great story. Loved it. I hope their is a chapter 3. Need to focus in on Jazmin and Mike. I like the reference to Mrs. Robinson.
Let me know when you write #3! So many options to this story!
This is really one of the best I have read. Especially the last couple of pages with Jasmine! Man were they good I'd give it a 6 if it was available!
Amazing writer. This story just blew my mind. Hoping for a few more chapters!
Great story. Looking forward to more. Have read this one many times over. Is amazing.
This is definitely the best, and best written, story I've read on literotica. I don't think you need a chapter 3 though, every story needs an ending and I think Jasmine and Mike getting together is a great one.
These are the 2 best stories on this site. Sex with the landlady, a sexy cheerleader coworker, a gorgous mature black woman and a black high school cheerleader. 4 fantasies cumming true!!!!
God, every second story or so that I read of yours, I end up having a new favourite. I love the way you write. :)
I hate you right now lol only kidding. This was One of the best stories I've read In a long time. No lie. I actually got lost a few times reading it, like I was totally in the story smoking a cigg. Only to have burn out on me, down to the filter, with my only taking a few drags from it and having to light a new one. I could go on but Its not neccisary to tell you how much this story is fantastic. Thanks for the read 5 stars to you. And I agree with another fellow on here, what a great ending it doesn't have to continue for it to be a fantastic story. I believe you should end it. It works to drop there he gets the girl. The aunt and the friend can (mentally to the reader) become lesbians. It all works great. But if you did write more I'd read it. Twice. :)
Wow never in my life have i read a short story so good it truly is the best in my personal experience please I gotta know if Barbara comes around and goes after mike maybe a nice 3 some with yasmine and mike :)
Now that he has not only done Cynthia and Shelly , Now he is with Jasmine and going to dinner to meet Aunt Cyn. it would be a nice way to go farther if when hes having dinner to get all of the Family to Q&A and see if Jasmine will share with her Aunt.
Kudos to you, great story line about an interesting subject. Cant wait for you to continue this story. I am truly interested in what Cyn will do when she finds out that Jasmine's new "friend" is Mike.
You are now my favourite Author.Give us more of the same.
Want to see reaction at Dinner when Mike turns up !
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
My vote? a 5!! this story, & the whole series 5*****!!
Thank You for so many hours of pure pleasure reading.
I don't know what else to say except WOW with capital letters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know, there are all sorts of sterotypes and mythes flailing around in the world about Black Men vs White Men. And I don't know whether they're true or not and don't care. But I know I love to eat pussy and all my friends luuuve to eat pussy (we are, incidentally - white) and I've played music with lots of Black guys and we talked, of course. I've never met a black man who liked or would even consent to eat pussy. Most white guys do, and many men who hail from India are proficient at it. So, Black girls watch-out, once you go white you'll never go back!! I Love Jasmine. Cyn and Shelly are very controlling and manipulative. Barbara seems to have her head on straight, though she is angry and with reason. Jasmine is the Lover here, the romantic.
This was a super sexy story!
As a black woman who has enjoyed white cock on numerous occasions, I loved reading from the white guy perspective.
Bravo, sweetie, bravo.
I loved it, as a writer of these similar Interracial love stories between black women and white guys I can say without shame your stories are written far better than my own.
I need to learn from someone like yourself who enjoys writing the same stuff as men, there is a lack of good IR love stories.
Keep them coming man, I want the romance to blossom between Jasmine and Mike and maybe more stories, secrets and such being exposed about Jasmine's family, maybe more conflicts with the husbands and their cheating ways. Maybe Mike will be forced to stop seeing her aunts, in order to be just with Jasmine; one of her conditions for their relationship to be better than her last one.
The romance is there, the sex is vividly described and you can only add more to this story and I will happily read them as a writer and fan of the same genre.
We need to write more of these stories, and add up the collection of beautiful black and ebony ladies.
"How lucky can one guy be, I kissed her aunt and then the niece kissed me. Like a fella once said you better learn to give her good head"
Mike your a man among men. Oh take a picture of Cyn for me, it will be priceless.
Wow it's all I can say while reading this story..man this one is a great damn story..which made me buck my ass thrice...keep writing...
This is fantastic. Though a small part of me wanted to see Mike get hurt a bit. I mean, after being told by a beautiful girl you're interested in tell you she's not interested due to her race, despite her reasoning, had to be tough. My heart aches just imagining being in that position. Then, the hot women you've been seeing, of the same race, might not... require your services anymore. This is all before Mike got any closure from Jasmine since it happened that night, not to mention she had been mad at him for a different thing.
Anyway, I know it's not a drama filled story, it's certainly no novella, but could you imagine Jasmine, at the end of their thorough session, basking in the afterglow ad saying, "Oh Mike, I so wish you were black." Or something along those lines.
I know MIke seemed to have move past the whole race thing, but to be quite honest I can't imagine a normal person accepting the situation as he did. Even the nicest people with the best of intentions would feeling the gnawing pain of rejection due to race. Cyn and Shelly no longer needing him would without a doubt compound that to the point that a person could easily wallow in misery for feeling worthless, useless, or unloved. And then Jasmine driving the point home... a man could lose his mind.
That was kinda heavy, but I uses I'm in a more dramatic mood.
Like I said the story is absolutely amazing I hope the next chapter is just as good or better.
But I could only give you 4 Stars because of the errors in the story.
You really need someone to edit your stories before you publish them. Don't make the mistake of thinking you can edit your own stories. Authors who get paid Millions don't edit their stories for a damn good reason.
Now that science has proven that all of Earth's population came from ancestors that originated in Africa, my hunger for sex with blacks has increased ten fold. In fact you could almost consider it incest with your ancestors.
You should disable anon comments. If someone is too lazy or inhibited to sign in (it ain't hard) then they shouldn't be allowed to comment. Especially nitpicky jerks who complain about editing. Really! It's not like the writers that publish on this site are getting rich. It's the characters, the narrative and the imagination that counts...not grammar...plus yours is just fine. Nuff said.
More chapters please. Can’t get enough of it. Added you to my favorite authors. And favorite stories.
I like the complication of introducing an age-appropriate partner, even if her racial concerns are rather easily overcome. This is fantasy after all! For me, being about 3 times the age of Mike, I am happy to be inspired by his extraordinary sexual energy and astonishing recovery rate.
I concur with lenmc still could run a little more, need Barbara to finish off! Very well done. Oh I see Ch 3!!!! I'm off to read
Wonderful descriptions and accurate down to how some blacks feel about dating whites, as I have dated several black women and have not yet met a "Jasmine" although there have been some absolutely gorgeous ones. Its just something about the difference in colors that make it taboo; but in reality there is no difference except in dealing with a few prejudiced people who can be rather rude, where when I date Asian or Hispanic I don't encounter the same reaction. Interestingly there are allot of Aunt Cyn's out there who are ready to break thru the barriers and see that some white men are better for and to them then their own race treat them and ironically those are the ones who end up chasing after the white whores who like in this story are willing to be gangbanged like meat.
(1/15/2022) Well then…don’t I feel foolish. I enjoyed the first chapter and believed it would turn into a Harem for Mike or a happily ever after with Mike and Cyn. You had to go and make the narrative complex, injecting drama with some betrayal. Well done. And now for chapter three, “Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?”. Yes, very well done. You could have named our hero “John” or “Prentice”. Now that would have been cool. Five stars!
5✨✨✨✨✨ STARS OUTSTANDING!!! Among the best I've read at Literotica!!! Ready to read Chapter 3. After a cold shower.
Glorifies cheating wives.
If I ever caught my wife cheating I’d use my .410 shotgun with buckshot.
On myself.
Bill S.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Husband's been gang banging another women previous to her infidelity. I have ZERO tolerance for infidelity, but if you're giving sexual satisfaction to another and neglecting your spouse, karma comes knockin'. so don't complain when the Piper collects payment.
Love the ultra-sexy conclusion with Jasmine! May continue reading for that, although it disappoints me that Shelly's endgame was to go bi on Cyn. 5 (in spite of that).
Very well written, but making me feel uneasy on account of the patronizing perspective toward black women and the objectification of blackness as a sexual fetish. That's degrading, derogative, disrespectful.
Your writing is so good i would assume your intellect is above that, but apparently not. To a white person you may seem liberal and progressive, but it would seem black readers would find you quite racist. But then again, from across the ocean, we're all kind of baffled by American's obsession with race in the first place..
I an having a great time reading this story. I can’t wait to discover Aunt Cyn’s reaction!
You are an incredible writer. It was fun watching how you bring all the pieces together.
Best story ever, bit drawn out at first, but when you keep reading its just great, i think I'm going to read all your stories
thank you