All Comments on 'Negotiations'

I did not come to this site expecting to find Critical Role fanfiction but I am surprised, impressed, and aroused. Excellent job!

Very well set up (plot-wise) and written for a first submission. More please.

Its been a long time since I've read a story so hot that also makes me really feel the emotional connection between the characters. Can't wait to read the rest!

That was much better then then my "ill sure vox machina as a joke because im board" ass deserved thanks