All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 04'

Loving this story line , keep it up

Please do continue the storyline and looking forward to the next chapter

This is such a great story and I can only imagine how much better it will become with future chapters! I'm an older man and love the thought of being with younger girls. I hope Henry ends up having sex with all of the girls and you keep it romantic and take the high road of caring, loving and sharing instead of the low road of jealousy and distrust.

Great story, great progression. Please try not to keep us waiting toooooo long. But don't spoil the tale by rush it.

Mny tks.

Wonderful story line and character build up. Thanks!

Like the pace, both of the story and your output of new chapters. You're definitely one of the more interesting writers on here with believable characters. Only criticism I had for this particular chapter was the way you resolved painting yourself into a corner - you had to narrate what happened with the author wasn't present. You say that he found out later, but there's no explanation of how. Plus, even if someone did find out later by a recap from someone who was present, it wouldn't be in such a specific conversational format. But these are just small nitpicks - it really is a great series and much enjoyed.

I love the way you write. It's not trashy. It's caring and funny. I love funny! I love the pace.

Thank you!

I love the story. I would honestly prefer if the chapters were a little longer. Just when you start to get into a groove reading it, it ends. But still really good story

But that is not a criticism. I like the sex in stories as much as the next person but, if that is all there is, it soon gets repetitive and boring. Although I hope this will develop into some sexual content at some time, (and I am sure it will), the anticipation is quite a turn on also - as well as developing an interesting story.

off the edge!

I'm glad you won't apologize for the lack of sex, in this series. Count me in 2 places..... that quick jerk off, and reading a fantastic story.