All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 05'

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Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 8 years ago
You are about to

Lose me as a reader. Make the next chapter interesting or I am History!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

There is build up and there is build up, you have exceeded what can reasonably be called build up. As one of your other readers suggested, waiting until chapter 906 for sex is a bit much. How about if you do something interesting by say chapter 100?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I enjoy the build up. 5 chapters and no sex yet. Looking forward to what happens.

Nebel815Nebel815over 10 years ago
Good

Great story writing, you have me waiting for each new chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fun story

In situations like this, young women basically ignore older guy. One can get great views that do excite.Sometime it is difficult to control

MaximguyMaximguyover 10 years ago
Outstanding.

This is really good. I love the internal conflict between repressed libido and trying to do the right thing. Please keep them coming, and please don't leave us without an ending if you run out of ideas! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Superb

Can't wait until chapter 06!

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Little Henry is a Southerner who is bored with writing lame magazine articles and wants to have some fun for a change. His fiction writing ranges far and wide from these erotic stories, an attempt at "the great American novel" and even a children's book.

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