All Comments on 'Neighborhood Milf Ch. 05'

Gonna read 5 shades of MILF?

Does every writer from the texting generation spell 'sight' incorrectly?

The plural of Milf is .........Milfs.

Why do you think you need a 's?

CONGRATULATIONS. You weave a teenager's fantasy into a fucking fairy tale ending. Your grammar and word selection keep this from perfection and the five-star ratings it deserves. Try belly everywhere you use stomach and review the difference between the transitive verb "to lay" and the intransitive "to lie."

BUT YOU HAVE A GOOD NARRATIVE VOICE AND GREAT STORY-TELLING SKILLS. THANKS FOR SHARING.

Stories are more believable if they are some where near real.

you lost me when he pulled out of an anus, went straight to a vagina, and then finished orally. How many bacterial infections do you want to spread during one evening?

maybe you should give it a west for a wile, you have been pretty busty.

This was a lot of fun to read, although the series was smoothly predictable. As a teenagers fantasy it was grand. (Pity about Aubri. Maybe in a sequel?)

I'm one of those who gets annoyed about erroneous grammar and this dropped the stars to 4, otherwise your write at "level 5". Please find a better editor...

I can't believe that, even after proof reading my comment, I mixed "you" and "your" when I wrote it.

So much for being an effective grammar nazi...

We need chapter 6.............in Chapter 5, just as he was about to cum we should have heard one more female voice call out just as he was about to cum saying "Wait, he still needs to fuck me" as everyone turned to see his mother standing in the doorway to the bedroom, naked, dripping wet and masturbating..............

What do you think big boy, ready to take on Mom?

Great story overall............

Nadine

I love this series so much. I revisit them every morning or when I'm bored at work and need relief. Going right to my favorite spots. This has been my fantasy for so long. In college I went and found a busty curvy mature girl my age that I can't wait to turn in to a milf. Sex while she's young, pregnant, and a milf I just can't wait. I think of these stories as she rides my cock which sounds like it matches the boy in the story's almost exactly. 7.5-8 inches long and about 5.5 thick except with a leftward curve. Her big ass humping away at my thick piece as we both suck her nipples

Ground is outside floor is inside

Yeah, adding his Mom would mean he has the whole neighbor hood!

Maybe one by one he gets them pregnant - even his Mom. So hot!

The thought of resulting pregnancies in stories gets me so hot.

Good story series - keep it up (pun intended)

What could be better than having four women all over your cock time and time again?

A dream come True,

I am married to an 85 year old and she is really something in the sack very very orgasmic it doesn't have to stop when you get older!! :=)

I do injections in my dick to keep it hard for 3 hours!!

She eventually has to cry uncle!!

Titties are on little girls. Tits are on big girls.

As some mentioned - proofread and check for continuity - sort of distracting from all the graphic interaction - still a fun sensual read! Keep writing!

You're kidding, right?

Think she'll want to join the book club...?

Tough to explain why she CAN'T... "While we'd love to have you join, really all we do is fuck your son. " Oh, I guess it wasn't as hard to explain as I thought...

A site is NOT a person, it's a place like a web site or a work site or a job site. The bed could have been a play site.

This chapter had at least three dozen errors in it. When someone is reading and they come across an error, it breaks the continuity of the story

I did not vote on any of your chapters of this story because there were so many errors.

It would have been a HOT story without all those errors.

Find an editor and have him or her correct your stories and republish them. And for God's sake, don't publish another story without an editor.

The 'Neighborhood Milf' series was incredible! Too hot to handle! More on 'Mrs Jensen' please!

Make part 6 where all husbands get the information about their wives and they would rape Chris

good stories in the series, but PLEASE get an editor. besides the minor (near-)homonyms, note this: when quoting dialog, the quote should end with a COMMA (not a period), and the rest of the sentence continues without a capital letter. Look at any page of a novel or short story and you'll see at least a dozen examples of this. how can you miss xomething so basic?

Maybe it's time to get those daughters involved as they learn what their mom's are up to.

Time to make it interracial?

What if he catches one of them with another boy? team tag?

all 5 amazinging well written had me hard all tru

A very lovely sight in the change room of Recreation gym in Armadale was that of hot boy John Canty who when in the buff looked so fucking hot with his pale milky white arse, blonde hairy chest and blonde hairy uncut stump cock

Ginette Searle went to a pickup joint in Carlton and was chattered up by a hot looking red bearded guy Billy and after quite a few drinks they went to an apartment in Richmond where they drank wine and pashed off - this was followed by Ginette lying on her back with her legs spread wide open and Billy rammed his hard throbbing 8 inch long red hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her hot wet dark hairy cunt which was flooded by a lava flow of hot steaming cum

Shirleen Standfast met up with Laurie at an apartment in Dandenong and after intense kissing they had wild 69 style oral sex and then Laurie lied on his back with his 8 inch long dark hairy thick cut cock pointing skyward and Shirleen smeared her red hairy cunt with heaps of lube and then lowered herself on to Laurie's cock which was fully buried deep inside her pussy and filled it with heaps of molten bubbling cum

Surely they would let Chris's mom join the Book Club!!! Any Ch. 6+?

Best fantasy

When i see a perfect female body I often think it's talking to me

Perhaps messaging isnt all that different.

Major source of happiness here is my wife has developed these.

She doesn't understand why they continually excite me.

I really don't mind. Got a decade or two to enjoy.

I loved this fantasy. Each chapter was different and fun. There were many twists and turns. The finale was fantastic. I agree with all the readers who think his mom should be invited to the next book club meeting. I am not sure Chris will go back to college with this waiting for him at home every Wednesday evening. Another idea if for Chris to bring some of his college buddies home with him for a book club meeting. There could be Chippendales at the Book Club with Chris and his college friends the stars of the show. Great story!!!!

5 stars. I agree with the others, his mom should be brought into milf club. The other milfs should lick each other out while watching him fuck his mom for the first time.

Did the writer ever give any consideration to hygiene? Going directly from fucking an add to putting his cock in a pussy then to a mouth. Gross!

FANTASTIC piece of erotica.

Is Lindsay's daughter invited into the fun?

How about Chris's mom? It was foreshadowed that she is a book club member.

Very sexy, thank you.

Then every chapter got more obvious and less interesting. Chapter 5 was so predictable I didn't bother reading beyond page one.

I loved each chspter. They were all great reads. I'd like more chapters.

Chris is such a lucky boy having so many women to fuck - when John Searle was in high school he wagged school to see his girlfriend Leora and after telling her to bend over and spread those fucking cheeks he drilled his rock hard blonde hairy thick cut cock deep inside her turd filled arse

Great story but only one issue....a dick that's only 7" long isn't by any measure Huge!! He needed to have as a minimum, a very thick 10" cock for this story to have any creditability.

Great read. Could really get into the action

Wow, absolutely Brilliant !!! This story was erotic and so funny at times. You have an incredible imagination. Throughout this chapter, I kept saying to myself, "Can this really happening to some lucky stiff (pun intended)." I hope you ignored the nasty anonymousy (wanted to spell it that way) neigh sayers. You done good!

I had to laugh at the 7” is not big comment.

The anonymous comment must be by someone who watches too much porn.

Look it up - average erect is 5.16 inches and the vast majority of Cocks are within about 3/4 of an inch of that.

I would be happy with 7”.

And more than one woman friend has told me that 8 or more is fun to suck but not especially comfortable for intercourse.

This Final chapter was so ghastly I couldn't read it. In its own way, it was even worse than the previous Chapter, Thank heavens you finally stopped here.

This soun

This is so horny and when Phillip Lamovie was in high school he fucked his big boobed blonde haired teacher Jan Dennis & at Jan's home they drank beer and pashed off - this was followed by steamy 69 style oral sex and then Jan lied on her back with her legs spread open and Phil drilled his hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut teenage cock deep inside her soaking wet blonde hairy cunt which was flooded by a massive lava flow of molten bubbling cum

Robin Gardner hit pay dirt when she visited a pickup joint in the city and met a hot looking dark haired guy Luke and after a few drinks they went to Robin's house where they sat on the sofa drinking wine & Robin unbuttoned Luke's shirt, ripped off her top and rubbed her massive pale boobs against his awesome thick jet black hairy chest - this was followed by steamy 69 style oral sex and then Robin lied on her back with her legs spread wide open & Luke rammed his hard throbbing jet black hairy 8 inch long thick uncut cock deep inside her soaking wet hairy cunt which was flooded by a tidal wave of steaming hot cock cream

When he was in high school Laurie Knightley became intimate with his classmate Klaus Puschenjak & one day after school they went to a football club pavilion where they kissed and then Laurie rolled back Klaus's foreskin and took in his mouth Klaus's bulging blonde hairy thick uncut cock - this was followed by Klaus lovingly caressing Laurie's gigantic jet black hairy chest & then Klaus took in his mouth Laurie's hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut cock - after this the hot guys jacked each other off and fucked each other senseless

He should marry Lindsay's daughter n continue fucking them both, n also have Book Club meetings every Wednesday at Lindsay's home

I only want to fuck Lindsay

Superb !!!!! Loved every second of it! This was AWESOME!!!!!

"Aubri"?? "Hydee"? I guess there are more people in his zip code than just this author that can't spell a damn thing correctly. Oh well, it sort of fits in with the world's least likely plot line. At least it's finally over.

Hey Anonymous (about 2 months ago),

RE:

""Aubri"?? "Hydee"? I guess there are more people in his zip code than just this author that can't spell a damn thing correctly."

Guess what - there is no 'correct' way to spell a name!

People name their kids what they want - HOW they want!

There are NO name spelling rules - so get over it!

Re: "Oh well, it sort of fits in with the world's least likely plot line"

It's 'FANTASY' ALL 'plotlines' are 'likely'!

Re: "At least it's finally over."

If you were 'offended' by either their names or the plot...why the HECK did you read ALL of it?????????

Absolutely fabulous orgy of cunt, cunt, cunt and still more cunt. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s U.K. I absolutely adore cunt in every way, love eating cunt while fucking another and fingering more. Omg the lucky lucky fucker. Fabulous series.

Loved the story....built thought about bringing his mom in also!!!

A wonderful story, loved the character interaction. What a lucky guy. I hope you continue to add to this series

Great ending to the series! Just work on the editing.

Great little series. Plenty of imagination and good ending or something left to expand into the book club meeting

Just needs an episode where his mother has joined the book club unaware of its purpose....

I thought you would've included Chris' mom in this story.

As she wondered why her son hadn't returned home yet, she decided to head over to Julie's house to make sure Chris was alright. Walking toward the loud sounds coming from the back bedroom she peeks in and is taken aback by the sight, she enters the room confronting Julie. She tells her friend that she isn't upset, but rather why wasn't she included?

I am glad his mom did not join in physically BUT she could have been the group's "madam." Lindsay's daughter, Aubri, should come back as they all settle down to his servicing the woman. Aubri could learn how to be "proper" award her man. All the book club could give Aubri lessons and become grandmothers and great aunts to Aubri and Chris' children. Wrap this up with an "Apply ever after" theme.

Having "had" an older woman, there in nothing better but no offsprings

Helen Nicopoulos rolled Back Chris Kiskiras's foreskin and munged down on his hard throbbing 9 inch long jet black hairy thick uncut cock

I read this and I was WTF it's like this person followed me from my freshman thru junior year in college, like wow dude you really have a knack for this writing.

Love this series. Wish he would impregnate one of them

Very good series. Not really believable but very entertaining.

This is so horny and the other night Laurie and Eli became very intimate and Laurie almost choked went he went down on Eli's hard throbbing 8 inch long dark hairy thick cut cock

Awesome story. I was kind of expecting that Chris's mom would be the surprise guest at this book club. Ch 6 perhaps?

I am hoping that Chris impregnates all 4 of them.

There was hot action when a slutty chick, Eli & Laurie got together for a threesome. As the chick rode Laurie's bulging greying hairy cut cock she went down on Eli's hard throbbing 7 inch long very hairy thick cut cock and swallowed his hot steaming cock cream

Great series, plenty of erotic scenes, would be fun if math teacher Mrs. Jones from ch. 01 could be part as well in the finale.

Awesome story. Great read. Really enjoyed the interplay between the ladies and Chris. Thanks for writing this story.

Just a lot of fantasy fun--thank you for stirring up some of my own memories (not quite as wild, but worth remembrance)

I agree with Durken82 I hope that Chris impregnates all 4 of them. They divorce their inadequate husbands (make out well in the divorces ) and they all live together. Chapter 6 almost writes its self.

The story was great but became weaker in Chapter four, but then Chapter Five with all four of the MILFs was just too predictable and boring. Sorry.

What a grand finale!!! Thank goodness for Viagra! This whole series was well thought out and written. I wish there was more of your work to read. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

This story is very interesting and I think it is a good ons

Very interesting story @ Alaa nuada

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Great story. What a great fantisy.

DD in one chapter to F in this one? That's where I stopped reading. Sorry.

oh my I love it

the correct answer always has remained “ground.” I'm not willing to commit to the idea that it always will be correct, but for now at least, it's the hands-down winner. Yes, that's right. “Ground” is the correct past tense form of “grind.”

Your writing improved in parts 3 and 4, but it got sloppy again in this one. One woman has two different names in one paragraph. And the story, which was already pushing the limits of logic and belief, jumped the shark here.

I am one of those people who believes there is a hard line between erotica and porn. A sexy, titillating description of a hand moving under a skirt, stroking a soft thigh, caressing warm flesh, deftly touching a moist lip and a finger gently entering a warm pussy is so much more erotic than shoving a hand up her cunt and stroking her test while she screams bloody hell. I think the title of the website says it all and I suggest many of us come here for some erotica rather the porn that is so readily available on so many nasty sites.

Super finale! Ker-sploosh! I had to read it in two sessions!

You just had to bring the professor back in didn't you is the mc so stupid that he is not getting her off shes getting herself off by causing pain and being a controlling little slut and 2 he's in fucking college he didn't have to go home even though you said his parents were making him come home that is completely bullshit they couldn't make him come home if didn't want to they can't tell him what to do anymore

Also you said they were so hot and sexy they could be in there own porno so basically you are saying they're dog ass ugly cause I'm sorry those fake ass sluts in porn isn't sexy there is nothing sexy about none of them so all you did was insult the women in your story

SO MANY mistakes!!!

Lost me when the "parents are busty"!

Fun story, enjoyed it.

To those who criticized this series - I beg you to do better. This is porn. It's no-holds-or-holes-barred sex. Filthy, dirty, debauched, nasty, unreal, and fun.

It was 'over the top' for sex. There were mistakes. But it got my nut.

That's what counts to me.

mistakes? What mistakes? I gloss over any imperfections and enjoy.

Aww he broke up with Aubri. I hope he got to tap that ass and steal her cherry at least.

Why are there no creampies? He seems to cum everywhere but in the one place he should - in a goddamn mature pussy! Pretty disappointing finish to be honest.

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟

Congratulations on enthralling series, a group of large breasted women, all of whom had partners who had lost their libido, for one reason or another, all find solace in the arms of the same young male. The premise is simple, feasible and plausible, making for a story that a reader can relate to.

Unfortunately minor spelling and grammatical errors crop up throughout all five chapters, one that I think could be a variation in the use of English in the UK and the US, the past tense of grind is not grinded but should be ground, other similar errors cause a break in the continuity of reading. Simple proofreading and editing would make for a far more satisfying reading experience.

His mom was upset she wasn't invited to the meeting but normally went so his mother is a slut too?

Maybe get mom involved too?

hmmmm, pretty good story, lots of sex, you have a talent but rather perfuctory dont you think? these women are just to be used with no emotion or feeling for them,,,,,,,so! when is the next meeting? UGH! definitely sophomoric, not for adults!,,,,,,,btw,,,,no such word as "grinded"

Great way to end the series. What a lucky man he was to have all those big-boobed milfs wanting him. Perfect!