All Comments on 'Neighborly'

For most all the world the slang for orgasm/semen is "cum" NOT REPEAT NOT 'come' so in any future stories make this change.

In reality, there is no word C-U-M. It was a device dreamed up by an early porn writer to try and be different. Come is the appropriate word, and I'm glad you chose to use it.

This is a very hot story, well worth the read.

Call it cum or call it come. Either word works beautifully in a very hot and fun-filled story.

Thanks so much for the entertaining story.

Too bad the rest couldn't acknowledge your writing as they debate your choice of a world for ejaculate. lol

Every story I write on here, I debate whether I should use "cum" or "come". Cum always seems to me like it should appear in a porn mag story, something akin to Penthouse Forum(though I think they use "come") but sleazier-which it often does. As one of the anons wrote, there is no word "cum"; yet its meaning is unmistakable. I'm something of a purist when it comes to usage, and prefer the more proper "come", so that's most likely what I'll use. Anyway, I'm glad everyone is enjoying the story, whatever it is I'm doing when Sherri makes me spew.

This was very well thought out, written, and presented.

I'm also in favor of "come" as a verb, nice metaphoric connection to arriving at a destination, as in "Come and play with me!" However, "cum" seems better as a noun, yet still sounds obscene. I find that "semen" usually works as a synonym, so use that as well, but some characters really are "cummers,"while others are "comers." Oh, the trials of literotica authors!!

Very entertaining read real hot sex!! Thanks for sharing.

Good job!

Everybody needs aa neighbor like Sherri. Nice story!