by gimlisam
You guys need to start writing again. Your characters are believable and very sexy.
Loved the story. I do hope you will continue with more on these two lovers.
I'm new to the world of bi-sexuality but I do truly believe that only another woman really knows how please another female.
Joan @ The Jersey Shore
I'm still shaking and my cunt is driipping wet. This was so sexy,so erotic,you hit a home run . Please write more about Nina and Laura.
Please check over your story for proper grammar and correct spelling before you post it. If you have trouble with it, there are editors around the site that can help you.
Other than that, good story.
What a terrific story you've written. Erotic, well crafted, with an excellent feel for dialogue and pace. I really liked this tale of two interesting and carnal women who come together in a believable circumstance. You have a fine talent for this genre...I will make it a point to read your other postings.
Thank you so much for taking the time to create this terrific work.
Best,
Bob