by just_like_water
The sex was great and the bits of humor were an added bonus!! Great job!
Interesting story...but why is she willing to be just one of his many? I would think she would want to be more than just that.
I absolutely LOVED your story, but two things keep it from 100%.
I thought the sex-talk was bit a cheesy at times and the end came too fast without real resolution.
That last bit is ARRRGHH, frustrating!!!
But seriously, keep at it, because everything else was beyond readable and enjoyable. Shoot, MUCH better than mine.
And I'm being real. :D
A deaf old lady saying vajayjay bandit. I laughed.
I didn’t care for the ending, that she was willing to be another notch on his bedpost.
The sex is absolutely amazing and so fantastic that you really don't want it to ever end. The two of you become one so complete you know that you will always truly remember it the rest of your life!
Orpheum89