All Comments on 'Neighbors'

Nicely written, continue on!

Great first story. I look forward to future ones. FYI, though, "AKA" means "also known as." When you used it, you meant, "that is."

You have a good feel for erotic writing. Your descriptions were very sexy and, overall, the story was a good one. Keep writing!

I just read this to my friend's wife, Tilly. I am so fucking hard and ready to cum she's going to blow me right now. Can't wait to shoot my hot load into her sexy mouth. Thank you! Fucking great story!

This was one of the best stories I have read on here.