All Comments on 'Neighbours'

... your idiosyncratic wording and/or spelling. Then I went to your Biography and saw your country of origin.

Can't say I like your wording but at least I understand it.

Enjoyed it very much look forward to the next installment. Only thing is your grammar, threw me for a loop your conversation in the story. Does or should it have been do?? Love the couple... in the story very hot together

poor grammar

the grammar was appropriate, it surprised me at first, but it only became apparent in those passages in which you were speaking. I found myself "hearing" you speak with a foreign accent!. Cool effect. Thank you