All Comments on 'Nellie Ch. 04'

Really sexy, love your descriptions. The orgasm tally was a fun idea to keep the story moving along!

Amazing that this author was able to keep it interesting between these three (four in one chapter) for four chapters.

Great plot.

Sad that Pinchbeck has not written anything else.

I'm surprised there are hardly any comments.

But the high ratings tell the score -- readers were pleased.

5 stars for each chapter.

Paul in Oklahoma