All Comments on 'Nemesis Ch. 01'

by roryt65

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Curious writing style.

Some more explicit description of her thoughts near the end of her training would have been better.

Please don;t allow the unfortunate mis-spelling of Nemesis at the end to put you of from continuig.

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