All Comments on 'Nephew Discovers Ch. 01'

Great sexual tension. Can hardly wait for part 2.

Bring on Part 2

Awesome dude, ive had many fantasies just like that, so can relate to your story, can't wait for next episode, only thing i would like to see is perhaps him having a fetish for their used panties/bikinis.

Great story. It certainly got me hard, can't wait for part 2 and the other daughter joining in. Possibly the maid as well. Awesome

You begin your story very well, keep continue in the same way. waiting the next chapter

Good start, keep it going. Just don't bring in his mother or sister.

The sexual tension between these three was fantastic. I can't wait to read more.

I will certainly be looking for the next installment of this story. Thanks for writing.

Please do write more.

Please continue this story- soonest. The possibilities are endless and most intriguing!!!

One of the hottest stories I've read on the site, perfection. Roll on chapter 2 !

I have to say that I enjoyed this story. Please write more!

OMG, wow what a great story. I love the way you set it up and took your time getting ot the point. WOw.

there is definitely reason to continue.

...hell, go for the gold.

continue with his tribulations , good start to a series .

great pace to the story. keep it going with the seducion and don't ruin it by going too quick. All the makings of a classic if you take it slow.

Keep up the great work

i enjoyed this one immensely. i look forward to the next chapter

UUUUUMMMMM Yes Please we got hear about the whole summer

Loved the first day, I would loved to been there to see in real life myself,,,

That was a nice start to a series. I would love to see you continue this story throughout his summer with his Aunt and cousin. It would be nice to see the cousin had some fun with him and also the Aunt

I love the story and the potential of where it might go. I would love to be in the nephew's place being "attacked" by the aunt and cousan. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Your first chapter was a terrific start. You managed to create a good background and you drew the readers into the story. I cannot wait to find out what happens next . . . they're so many possibilities.

it was an excellant story I can't wait until it goes farther

You haven't done much with the two, so far and there's still the other cousin-yeah, go for it. A whole field is out there. Your writing and descriptions are good and your plot is good- plus, plus, plus adds up to great.

all i could say i cant wait for more...... So please hury up

Very well written, however need an ending. You cant leave us hanging like this

Keep going!

Great start, I like where this is going! Please write more!

Really slow boiler at first that took us in, simmered along and built up to a wonderful conclusion. Please continue the story.

Don't let the followers of your story get too cooled off, it only hurts your chances at creating a following for this great story..release chapter 2 already!! Lol, great start but we've been waiting on the other part for nearly a month..

You HAVE to write Chapter 2!!! This story is just way too hot to not be continued.

what bugs me the most, is people that write stories that say Ch 1, etc, say they are going to write more, and then never do! this is too good a story to NOT keep going...please for the love of mike, post the next chapter!!!

I can't wait to read more

You promised at the beginning that there would be more: "If people like this story then I would be happy to extend it as I intend that it will be the first part of a series." It certainly looks like people like it; most of the complaints come from the time we're waiting. We're not unreasonable; Ch.01 certainly didn't look like it was thrown together,and we're willing to wait for quality; it can't be rushed anymore than a fine wine, or a good dinner, can be. But give us a hint: let us know that we're waiting for something that'll blow our sox off [or get some other garment off if that's what will happen]. We don't need a lot of hints; just tell us it's coming [or cumming] and we'll wait without complaint. But let us know we're not waiting in vain. Please, please, please!

Fantastic story, I really enjoyed reading it. Where is the promised next chapter? You should write & post the next chapter soon as this is too good a story to leave as is.

hi - still waiting for ch 2 - pleeaseeee

sooooon

I've waited for five months for ch.2, its been too long!!! I have you in my favorites and periodically check for the next installment. I am running out of space and will soon have to delete some authors, and as they say," out of sight out of mind".

Sorry that there is no second chapter, i had fully intended to write it but factors that were out of my control stopped me from doing so. I'm going to attempt to write the second chapter over the next month or so but I can't make any promises as to wether or not i will finish it.

I just want to thank everyone for their comments and their patience

I know it's a little cheap but i couldn't help but vote 100.

By all means, continue this story. You are a wonderful writer and you're doing a great job with this story!

Thank you!

Good story, nice build up. I really enjoyed it. Hurry up with part 2, I can't wait.

One of the best, I've read so far.

That was very hot. Awesome story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

I'm just now discovering this story. I read chapter two, and it's nearly as good as this one. You should make chapter three. Without a doubt, this is the best incest story I've read on this site. Love it, love it, love it! More more more!

Sounded real and I felt I was the poor fellow getting a lovely hand job. Wish in the next part you would allow the Aunt at least to grow her hair back. Thanks

Get your fingers to writing!

I only recently discovered your works and am blown out of my mind at your talent in describing serious sexual practices without resorting to what I describe as 'gutter' language.

Do love your stories but am disconsolate that you seem to have vanished.

Please come nack.

Really enjoyed this story...poor nephew !

What a fantastic and wonderful way to begin a vacation I only wish that I had an aunt and cousin like these.

So far so good

The story line is a good one and leaves a body looking for the story to continue. However it would make for a better story if it weren't first person. All in all a good story that needs to continue.

It was hot as hell. Really enjoyed it. It also reminded me of my aunt and cousin who I used to watch change cloths from a hidden Vantage position. Looking forward to more fun.

Its great i love it if the three of them will dominate him it will be amaizing maybe make him a pet

This story would be a lot better if it didn't sound like it was written by an English professor. God awful. Couldn't get past the sauna.

Great story, with a few wrong words that don't make sense but otherwise excellent.