All Comments on 'Nepotism Ch. 02'

Definitely keep going! Definitely have them fuck at work!

Their love grows on the tip of nose of his father. Now they can meet n have fun in Cain's house. And slowly they becomes unofficial couple. They can start a new family in his house secretly. And may be after Harrol's sudden death ..they can b real couple on love

Those risky sex scenarios are the best, sadly it was too short. Keep up the story but please put more work into the actual sex.

The start of a great love

I loved the whole bathroom part at the end from start to finish

Evan better than part 1

The first episode you had Evelyn dressed in skirts, dresses pantyhose.. what happened?? Please have Evelyn and Cain fuck in the basement at work, at his apartment, let them go one dates ,get hotels, and Cain just pounds her into a bed. We STILL haven't gotten Evelyn on her back legs up and Cain destroying her. Eventually, have her get pregnant, and Harold find out.. please

I would like you to write more chapters, keep them cumming !!

Didn't find it as good as the first part. But then again once the incest happens I usually lose interest unless you somehow keep my interest. The phone sex was getting boring; my thoughts at that point just go over his place and get some. But to each is own.

Didn't do it for me. *

"The savage is loose!" I remember watching that movie a long time ago.

Loved the quick sequel! Thanks!!

someone would complain it's too heavy.

I loved it

Another chapter to come?

you had me - i thought harold was about to discover cain!! nice ending. loved the phone sex. 5 stars!! can't wait for the next chapter!!

Loved both in series, more please!

Loved both parts so far. But now that they are truly engrossed, we must have more!! What happens during work? Maybe he could take pictures and brag to the douchebags. How many chances do they take and any more close calls? Does dad ever find out? So many possibilities, please give us more!!

Love the story, need to bring in some golden showers now with cain between his mom's legs & she lets go of her golden nectar.

The whole thing. When he asked for the favor, I thought he was going to pee with her holding his cock; directing his flow at her own pissing pussy. Oh well.

I don't know where this story is heading but I intend to find out!

Luv mommy's urine tease and Cain driving his tongue into his mother's urine-soaked cunt while she chats with her seemingly cantankerous husband.

Lit should start allowing rating of stories by how many times they make us cum in one reading. LOL! Sunburycd's stories would be the leaders for me! LOL.

Writerotica / Ray (retired author/avid reader)

Well you certainty did it...your writing skills are brilliant. Not sure how you were going to recover from the previous story that seemed to be a one up, now a full series. Good work..........():\

Love your stories so well written but you do have one small fault. In many of your stories you keep writing form instead of from. Not always but every now and then