All Comments on 'Nerd Teaches a Lesson 01'

I like how it has started, can't wait to see the rest

You show promise. Now, go through your story line by line and fix the small mistakes. For instance: "Tyler stood in a corner talking to his friend Larry about their new science project on the chemical properties of different solutions; they were at a party discussion science! "

Change discussion to discussing.

Good luck!

A good start, don't leave us hanging around for the next chapter for ages

"to be continued"