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All Comments on 'Nerdy Friends with Benefits Ch. 01'

by Lowluhh

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MrBitternessMrBitternessabout 6 years ago
Nit picking nerd rage

I know this is so trivial but I had to point out that the Daleks say "EXTERMINATE" not "Eliminate"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

You need an editor, there are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes in this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
not very good and....

it seems like it is in the wrong category. Didn't seem to have too much romance about it. More like erotic couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good start

I hope you write more chapters so I can enjoy

ErrolBookErrolBookabout 6 years ago
Good Beginning

Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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