All Comments on 'Nest Slave Ch. 01'

re read a couple of the Real Gor Novels. Mix the back ground in with some of the stroy action so as not to loose your readers intrest

I thought it was a great start and hope you continue with the story!!

You write very well. Could have done without some of the back-story but I liked where it was going. I would have loved to have read more. Please come back and continue the story!

You are well written. The story flows well. However, it ended with suspense, but I see no addition. Do you not have another story in you? To finish this beginning?