by pandsal
....troglodytes hovering over a braindead sweating porker I'll turn on fear net.
just what everybody needs two sickos living next to them there are saner people in prison then these two.
Oh dear, you can't please everybody it seems. I enjoyed it anyway, but then I enjoyed it when I read it on 'Swinging Heaven' a little while ago. Keep writing stories of this quality pandsal, some of us appreciate your work.
Is this the best you can do? Stale sex life=WACC story and boring sex scene? If this is swinging I am glad I don't have a sexual fetish like you and sissy freak kenny boy have.
Written as though a diary entry rather than a story, which as its own appeal. Could have been fleshed out a little perhaps, but enjoyed it. Keep going. Cheers
Actually a lot better than Ch.1 ! That is NOT really high praise...this report is OK...it even incorporates some dialogue! But it IS fairly banal.
...make me wonder why people bother posting stories on literotica. Certainly puts me off.