All Comments on 'Never a Ruby So Deep'

Ok, I loved it!

However, you tend to over describe, and I found it maddening. In some areas, I had to skim through the over blown descriptions just to stay with the story line. I believe the story could have been cut in half. It would have a better pace and still left the reader breathless, demanding more...

You are very gifted and have a wonderful imagination. I love your ideas, just embrace simplicity and burn your thesaurus!

Please, DON'T STOP! I look forward to the future development of these characters. They are yours to command and ours to enjoy!!

Please don't take offense, I meant no disrespect. You are very brave to put yourself out there, and we thank you for it!

Your french is off, though your story is interesting.

Next time, have someone check over your french.