All Comments on 'Never Again'

... not only the female lead is left lacking something. Nice start, but the point of this short story is ... mmh. Please consider a sequel to add some interesting plot lines and characters interactions because the starting set up looked promising.

Thanks for the feedback. The female lead is my wife. I had written a long story introducing her and my complicated feelings in our relationship, but the story was repeatedly rejected over silly things and I finally withdrew the submission. This story is true (with some embellishments for details I couldn’t possibly know) and was intended as a short breakout to provide details on what I k ow of her past relationships introduced in the long story. Without that context it doesn’t seem to have a real start or end. I thought writing all of this would help me, but I’ve come to view the rejections as a sign that I probably need to leave these stories untold, at least for now. Thanks for reading.