All Comments on 'Never Again Ch. 03 Pt. 01'

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SSSKan1955SSSKan1955about 14 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Don't kerave us hanging

Finished the story - are the kids brother and sister? Story is incomplete....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
editing

the switch between perspectives was really confusing, made the story less enjoyable. maybe use a line of asterisks or something between perspectives next time?

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