by goosebbv
I liked the plot but thought Judy's reaction was literally unbelieveable - if you had had her give ir up to one other guy as a revenge fuck would have been quite believeable and would have made this story a five The shift from virgin to willing participant in gang-bang is too formulaic - particularly when you ascribe the behavior to two different girls
Most of the stories on this site require at least a minimal suspension of disbelief. This one requires a total suspension of disbelief.
Without a denouement, who is to be believed? Her boyfriend, or the idtiotic trouble-making teens who don't really have a clue concerning male-female relationships?
Sorry, this one gets a very low score for that reason.