All Comments on 'Never Too Late'

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manimal51manimal51over 12 years ago
GET OVER YOURSELF!!

This story wasn't about rape. It was about how two people overcame their traumatic pasts and came together with the help and love of another. I thought it was a well written and thoughtful story. Thank you, oh sagacious one, for the good read. 5/5

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
weird, but still five-star

Seriously! One of the most unusual plotlines I have ever seen, but it comes off as being a wonderful and loving story. (Arguably, better placed in "Romance".)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very Nice

This is a very nice story. Ignore the ones that don't like it because of the rape. I was raped at 17. I know how it feels and this was a story to help over come that and his problem. The romance and caring helped all three. The only part I did not care for was the 7 year old having sex already. Keep your stories coming.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Very well done

A sweet loving, but somewhat sad story, reading about what had happened to the two of them, but in the end it all turned out good.

Thanks for the good story

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
Rich and Tex were right on.

I thought it turned out to be a really good story. You got Five Stars from me!

sexyboy373sexyboy373over 11 years ago

Brilliant story very well written and sympathetic to a very traumatic situation for both of them. I loved it

surenderme08surenderme08over 11 years ago
Awesome Story!

Just perfect. A very sensitive and sexy story. Problems can always be resolved with loving kindness.

rightbankrightbankabout 11 years ago
wrong in so many ways

the sister is a practicing psychiatrist, the person who traumatized her brother, and then takes him and his fiancee to bed?

the fiancee was so brutally raped and abused that she is scarred mentally and physically.

the betrothed couple planned on separate bedrooms but changed even before the wedding to share one with a third, his sister.

the 6 year old daughter was felating her 12 yo soon to be cousin.

what a disgusting and unbelievable mess.

all of this is in addition to the silly storyline errors. i.e. she was living in a shelter and having dinner while simultaneously staying with him.

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 7 years ago
Failed Execution

Most of the themes in the story could work but the details in this story bashes disbelief in the face. Add to that the stilted unnatural conversations and the potential the story had did a belly flop into the feces.

Too bad really. It might be worth reading if some of the details are adjusted and the dialog is rewritten.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
???

meggie would turn into a whore from pheromones in the air??? liz the quack as all the answers. more like mentally ill slut lesbo. little i mean tiny johnnie couldn't satisfy a duck with that little dickey...very silly story

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
When.....

Liz came home and instantly took over, I knew what was going to happen and quit reading. No story there, just same ole, same ole...

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