All Comments on 'New Acquaintance'

I thought this was well written and hot! However you say that she had his cock in her mouth and then you're saying that he's taking his jeans and boxers off, need to make sure that your story moves smoothly from one scenario to another. Also didn't get the reference to BDSM unless you're doing another chapter which I would love to read.

words and other read stories.

This is a story worth reading/experiencing.

Good Job!

Alan

A good, realistic story. Not so keen on all the Americanisms but enjoyed the rest of the writing and loved the 'strip!' bit. Thanks.